Now let's try a sample essay topic.
QUESTION: When all the other ranch hands go to town, Lennie, Candy and Crooks are left behind. Describe what each of these three does after the others leave, and explain what they have in common that causes them to be left out.
A plan of the proposed essay follows.
Essay Plan
Para. 1. Lennie - goes to pet his puppy in the barn, then enters Crooks' room
Para. 2. Candy - 'figuring' about, the dream farm, joins Lennie in Crooks' room
Para. 3. Crooks - rubbing liniment on his back, hostile to Lennie at first, joins in 'dream' of farm
Para. 4. All three are upset by Curley's wife
Para. 5. In Common - all are handicapped/crippled - not just physically
The beginning of one model answer follows.
Model Answer
When the other hands leave to go to town, Lennie goes to the barn to pet the puppy which Slim has given him. The puppy is still only one or two days old, and Lennie has been told not to pat it too much, but he can't resist going to see it at this time.
After seeing his puppy, Lennie notices the light on in Crooks' room, and goes in. At first Crooks is hostile and tells him he has 'no business being there', but is reassured that Lennie is harmless when he says he just wants to 'set'.
Meanwhile, Candy is still in the bunkhouse, thinking and 'figuring'. Shortly before, George and Lennie have shared with him their dream of buying a little farm.
Candy has offered to add in his savings, which may make the purchase possible. Excited by this prospect of a release from his boring existence, Candy is busy poring over some of the details of the new scheme.
After some time, he comes into the barn looking for Lennie, and also ends up in Crooks' room, the first time he has ever been there.
Until Lennie and Candy arrived, Crooks had been having a very quiet time, rubbing liniment on his injured back. When Lennie arrives, Crooks speculates on why he and George travel around together. Then he taunts Lennie with the possibility that George may not return from town.
At first Crooks makes fun of Lennie's wild plans for buying a farm, but after Candy arrives and confirms the details, he too becomes excited by the scheme and offers to join in.
Later, Curley's wife comes into the room on the excuse of looking for her husband. The three men unite against her, but she insults them and threatens Crooks with accusing him of molesting her before she leaves.
Each of the three men who are left behind is handicapped in some way. Curley's wife comments that '... they left all the weak ones here.' Crooks, of course, is a physical cripple, but he is also black. It would not have been possible for him to mix with the other hands, even if he was physically fit.
Candy is also physically handicapped, having lost his hand in an accident on the ranch. He is also an old man, and has already admitted to George and Lennie that he: ain't got the poop no more.
Lennie is the only one of the three who is not physically handicapped (unless you consider his giant size and strength a handicap), but he is mentally backward. He has been left behind because he cannot be relied upon to behave appropriately in town.
So, each of the three has at least one disability.